Ross Anthony's Revision Notes:
Warning: Ending Revealed (turn back now if you don't
want to know!).
I'd have written a different ending, but if I was
going to use theirs, I'd not have Richard be seen by
the gunmen, I'd not have a gunman fall in his trap -
what exactly did that add to the film? It would be
more menacing if the gunman missed it. Richard tries
to help the girl with the map, after hissing at her
(I liked that part). I'd have him grab their stupid
map and burnt it. And then during the suffocation
scene - it would take a long time to sufficate a
person - wouldn' it? I'd insert slow-mo shots of the
gunman shooting up the foreigners party hut. That
would intensify the drama of the snuff. The way it
was filmed treats this killing just like a loose end
that needed to be tied up. It also was a bit out of
character. Richard had done no courageously unselfish
act prior -- all were selfish. Also, what was with
that computer email thing at the end?
My ending:
The girl w/ map gets shot in the arm and/or leg,
Richard snatches her from the searching gunman.
Hide's with her until the gunman go raid the party
... He swims back to Koh Pangon with her, and we are
left guessing as to the beachers. Richard cries on
the raft and colapses on top of the uncouncious
woman, has another Daffy dream in which he tells that
whacko to f' off! In the dark another raft bumps
theirs - it's the French couple with Costo. (Is that
too corny?) Come to think of it, I'd also not have
had Richard's map be the reason for the downfall. I'd
have liked to see a different group of equally
naïve travelers find the beach, but by other
means - maybe another map, maybe they watched Sal go
back and forth. But it would have brought a wider
reality to the conflict. Do you have a better
ending? Send it in!
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